I want to thank everyone who attended our webinar hosted by Elastic path on February 14th, 2008. At the end of the webinar we had suggested to the audience members to send in their landing pages for a quick critique. Today is one of 6 posts in which I will review and give tips on a specific landing page. The website I will be reviewing today is: Pinkmascara.
Pinkmascara.com is a unique online boutique that offers designer fashions and latest trends. I clicked on the URL that features a popular product and this is what I found
At first glance the site has an overall clean look. I can see the dress is displayed and along the right side there are several different views. The left navigation features the designers, and the bottom is displaying a number of ads or locations to click on throughout the site.

At second glance, I notice some areas that can use improvement and optimization:

I thought the placement of these features in the right panel was nicely done, but I have a few recommendations.
All the items in this area provide a great support for the shopping experience. Adding a title such as “Shopping Made Easy” will re-emphasize the concept with site visitors.
Additionally, the phone number should include some text next to it “order by phone 1.866.740.7465.” The live chat is a great feature, but of course only when it’s available! So when it is offline I don’t think it should be listed. The Free Ground Shipping, when applicable, is a incentive that should be placed near the call to action rather than to right panel. It might be a great idea to add some enticing details about the return policy for example (no obligation 30 day guarantee). Lastly, there is no information here about the privacy policy which is always a concern to visitors.
I clicked on the sizing guide listed

Now, if I read correctly the designer was T-Bags, yet it is not listed here. Size guide should correlate directly with the product. What’s the point of having it if it does not address the concern of the visitor?

Try a larger, brighter add to bag button. I would actually test with adding an add to bag button when the user clicks on the image.

The images along the bottom, although necessary as links, display images that compete with the main focal point of the page. This is after all a product page, so the focus should be on the product on not on the items below.
Although I am focusing on the landing page, I have a couple of notes to add about the navigation. Now, if I land on this page, but choose to browse, I can navigate by Designer or by Department. For someone who is not familiar with pinkmascara.com, they may initially feel bewildered by the number of designers listed. Additionally, the list is poorly organized. Although it is alphabetically ordered it can still be further grouped to ease navigation. For example, as I clicked on a specific designer I landed on shoes rather than apparel, although I wanted apparel. Or as I clicked only two items came up. So my advice for both items would be to include the number of items available by that designer and group the designers by, shoe designers and apparel designers for example.
There are a number of things pinkmascara.com does beautifully. There are some items that need optimization as well. I hope I offered helpful tips that can be implemented immediately, you can always contact us for more help too 
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